Potrzebuję tylko żeby ktoś mi sprawdził, czy jest napisane poprawnie gramatycznie i ewentualnie coś dopisać lub skreślić ma być od (120-150 słów).
Hi Lisa,
I’m writing to ask you for your opinion about online shopping. I’m asking you because recently I read about it in the internet and I found it very interesting and controversial.
On the one hand online shopping makes our life easier because you can buy anything you want in the internet and it will be delivered to your home and you don’t have to go out.
On the other hand you can’t be sure about the products. You don’t know in fact how they look like or smell and taste or if they will fit to you if these are clothes.
In my opinion online shopping is dangerous because you can’t be 100% sure what you buy and from what person you buy. I’ll be very grateful if you will write me your opinion on this topic.(148)
Hope to hear you soon, XYZ
wydaje mi sie że żadnych błedów jesli chodzi o gramatyke nie ma a list może być
I’m writing to you because I would like to ask you for help. I want you to give me your opinion about online shopping. I’m asking you because I've read about something in the internet recently and I find it very interesting and controversial.
On the one hand, online shopping makes our life easier because you can buy anything you want via the internet and it will be delivered to your home and you don’t have to go out.
On the other hand you can’t be sure about the products. In fact, you don’t know what they look like or smell and taste or if they will fit you, in the case of clothes.
In my opinion, online shopping is dangerous because you can’t be 100% sure what you're buying and who's a person you are buying from. I’d be very grateful if you could write me your opinion on this topic.
Hope to hear from you soon.