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Mam napisany list po angielsku, chcę tylko aby mi go ktoś kto dobrze zna gramatykę angielską sprawdził:P

Hi John,

I’m writing to tell you about my uncle’s wedding. It was on the 3rd of November in the Cracow in the Galaxy Hotel.

One week before the wedding we’re preparing all party. We had booked hall in the Galaxy for two hundred people. We’re ordering suitable meals, drinks and cakes. My mum all the time was calling somewhere. I was responsible for the decorations. I was hanging balloons and ribbons. Everybody was bustling.

Everything was so incredible. But when we came to the Galaxy everyone saw that there weren’t a band! Happily my dad knows gorgeous musician and he with his band were in the Hotel after 30 minutes.

The wedding was wonderful. I and all of the guests were having fun. Everyone was satisfied and were congratulating for such good party.

Hope to see you soon.

Love, XYZ

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Hi John,

         I’m writing to tell you about my uncle’s wedding.  It was on the 3rd of November in the Galaxy Hotel in Cracow.

         One week before the wedding me and my family were preparing to the party. We booked a hall in the hotel for two hundred people. We ordered suitable meals, drinks and cakes. My mum was calling somewhere all the time. I was responsible for the decorations. I was hanging balloons and ribbons. Everybody was bustling.

         Everything was so incredible. But when we came to the Galaxy everyone saw that there weren’t a band! Happily my dad knows gorgeous musician, who has got a band, and they were in the hotel 30 minutes later.
        The wedding was wonderful. Me and all of the guests had fun. Everyone was satisfied and were congratulating for such a good party.

          Hope to see you soon.

Love, XYZ

Myślę, że tak będzie dobrze :)