Question

Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów.
tj. opowiadanie o tym że kupuje bilet dla kogoś, kto potrzebuje wrócić do domu

It was a cold, cloudy day in October. I was shopping in Galeria. I was looking for a new jacket. Going from shop to shop, I was felling very tried. I decided to rest and I went to the 'Feel the chill'.
Half an hour later, I was sitting there. After drinking my frozen yoghurt, I saw my friend Ola. She come across as desperate. I came up to her quickly. As soon she calmed down she told me she had been stolen. She worried about how she gets home. I tried cheering her up. Shortly afterwards, I asked Ola wheather was buying a bus ticket for her. She agreed for this and she was as happy as Larry. 'I'm glad I have met you' said Ola holding me close.
As soon as she had gone for a bus, I went shopping again. After a while I found a beautiful jacket and I tried it on in fitting rooms. I looked pretty so I decided to buy it.
The moment I wanted to pay for this I seen I hadn't been having enough money. I felt embarassed. At the same time I was reminded I lent my friend money. In splite of all I was pleased that I had helped her.

Answer 1

I was feeling very tired.
She came across as desperate.
As soon she calmed down she told me she had been robbed.

Poza tym, reszta jest w porządku :)