Popraw błędy (głównie czasy) lub zastąp wyrażenia tak, aby były one jednolitym, poprawnym opowiadaniem. Uzasadnij wprowadzone zmiany. Ilość słów 200-250 (Punktów jest sporo- sam oceń, że bardziej warto się postarać i zrobić to dokładnie, niż stracić te punkty od razu, gdy zgłoszę błędne). Możesz totalnie zmienić składnie, budowę, zdania, byle sens został ten sam.It was in 2009 year. At tenth June I flew to Sri Lanka. This holidays was supposed to be incredible. I haven`t thinked that here will happen this horrific event.Three first days in Sri Lanka was really curious. I have saw very interesting places in Sri Lanka, for example the national museum of Colombo, Colombo Dutch Museum, Colombo Fortress and Kelaniya Raja Maha Vihara. In third day of my tour I went on the beach. I swam in Indian Ocean, I tanned and I played the volleyball. Circa five p.m. I would return to the hotel. Ridding, I have seen a giant wave. Maybe it wasn`t a tsunami, but was above five meters high! I was very scared. I can`t feel anything at the moment. Our bus crashed with trees. Almost everybody died. I and rest of survivors were under the water. Some peoples had no legs. Splinters of glass hurt our eyes and skin. Luckily few seconds later the water level came down and we could breath. Then I fell into a swoon. I waked up three days later in small, untidy hospital. I thinked that I must return to Poland. Few days later I have been in Warsaw. I am healthy now, but I will nevermore go to Sri Lanka or other Asian country.
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