Mógłby ktoś sprawdzić rozprawkę: In today's world, on Internet forums, we can read that teenagers spend too much time on fun, studying or earing money and they have not time for reflections about morals problems. Should they think about this problems? Thought there are many good sides of they should, there are also some bad sides. On one hand, teenagers are too young to thinking about morals problems, but on the other hand they should be interesting this problems, which conserns their own life, their future, their own opinions. Nowadays, young people are very busy. They have a lot of homework and they spend many time on learning for exams. At the weekends, they want have fun in their life. In their life haven't time to thinking about morals problems, because school and fun is for them very important. When they are done with school, they start looking for work. Also earing money is main thing in their lives. Symming up, teenagers are too young to thinking about moral issues. This isn't time on thinking about this problems. I belive that the parents understand their. In my opinion, morals problems are for adults. Young people should studying, having fun and earing money. In our life are young people, who want to participate in social life. People should not give general opinion, because it hurt the others teenagers.
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MarcoZ
Too young to think should be interested in those problems concerns and they spend a lot of time Weekends they want to have some fun in There is no time to think about moral problems Earning money is also quite important thing in their life. Summing up... It isn't time to think I believe that their parents will understand them Young people should study, have fun and earn money because it hurts the others
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heheheh12
Głównie literówki: earning, moral problems, these problems, though, of why they should, too young to think, interested in these problems, concern, much time, want to have fun, in their life they haven't, summing up, this isn't time to think, believe, that parents (bez 'the'), understand them, should study, have fun and earn, there are young people, it hurts the other teenagers
should be interested in those problems
concerns
and they spend a lot of time
Weekends they want to have some fun in
There is no time to think about moral problems
Earning money is also quite important thing in their life.
Summing up...
It isn't time to think
I believe that their parents will understand them
Young people should study, have fun and earn money
because it hurts the others
earning, moral problems, these problems, though, of why they should, too young to think, interested in these problems, concern, much time, want to have fun, in their life they haven't, summing up, this isn't time to think, believe, that parents (bez 'the'), understand them, should study, have fun and earn, there are young people, it hurts the other teenagers