Prosze o sprawdzenie opowiadania ( poprawnosc gramatyczna) dodaniu mrocznego zakonczenia oraz przeksztalceniu kilku zdan na czas Past perfect-(bardzo wazne )
Dodam ze mialem uzyc czasow :
Past Simple
Past Countinuous
Past Perfect
Sandra lived with her father in a small village near Warsaw. The weren't rich but lived together and were happy .
One cold day when she wanted to get warm by the fireplace she noticed thtat there is no wood . So she went in to forest search a some wood.
Sandra was walking forest path beetween trees. Sudeenly She heared the rustle of broken branchles (gałezie )and felt a strong blow to the head.
When she woke up she was lying on the concrete in a dark room . Her hand's and feet's were bound . When she looked around she saw a samll candle and a note with words ''In an hour I will be beack , it's already the end of the game ''
When se cut a rope carefully stood up and began to look for the door.
She took a candle and went to the wall.
She found the door when sudeenly a strong gust of wind blew out the candle .
At the door she saw a man in dark cloack.
He held a knife in his hand ....... tu prosze o ciekawe i mroczne zakonczenie do 3-4 wersow .
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Sandra lived with her father in a small village (Napisałbym town - miasto) near Warsaw. The(y) weren't rich but lived together and were happy .
One cold day when she wanted to get warm by the fireplace she noticed thtat there is no wood . So she went in to (the) forest search a(for) some wood.
Sandra was walking forest path beetween trees. Sudeenly She heared the rustle of broken branchles and felt a strong blow to the head.
When she woke up she was lying on the concrete in a dark room . Her hand's and feet's were bound . When she looked around she saw a samll (small) candle and a note with words ''In an hour I will be beack , it's already the end of the game ''
When se cut a(the) rope carefully stood up and began to look for the door.
She took a candle and went to the wall.
She found the door when sudeenly a strong gust of wind blew out the candle .
At the door she saw a man in dark cloack.
He held a knife in his hand.
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