Prosze o sprawdzenie poprawnosci gramatycznej (opowiadanie ma byc w czasach past simple i past continous ) Prosze o wypisanie błedow jesli takowe sa ; )
One december day in Czestochowa I woke up very early. That's was foggy , cloudy nad wet morn , so I started read a book . After I read a few pages I decided to woke up my brother and cousin . We ate a breakfast . Because it was a sunday , we spent that day at home . We were in fantastic humour , when suddenly we heard a starnge scream . We were terrified , byt we were interested this event .
So we went to the attic . There we saw a ghost in white cloack and a funny small hat . It was amused and cheerful . It was reading a very old book . We felt the fear and amazement . We were interested in his behavior, so we asked him what he was doing and who he was , but the ghost disappeared . Then we came back to the living room and continued playing cards . Next day when my parents came back to the delegation I told them about ghost , but they didn't belive me
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One december day in Czestochowa I woke up very early. The weather was foggy, cloudy and wet, so I started reading a book. After I read a few pages I decided to wake up my brother and cousin. We ate breakfast. Because it was sunday, we spent that day at home. We were in fantastic humour, when suddenly we heard a strange scream. We were terrified, but we were intrigued what happened, so we went to the attic. There we saw a ghost in white cloak and a funny small hat. It was amusing and cheerful. The ghost was reading a very old book. We were afraid and amazed. His behaviour was interesting, so we asked him what he was doing and who he was. Suddenly the ghost disappeared. Then we came back to the living room and continued playing cards. Next day when my parents came back from the delegation I told them about the ghost, but they didn't belive me.
Strasznie się powtarzasz ale ładna historyjka.