Proszę o sprawdzenie mi tej wypowiedzi. Czuję, że jest w niej sporo błędów, a jutro będę musiała opowiedzieć o tym filmie. Dam najlepszą. Będę wdzięczna za poprawienie błędów pogrubieniem, albo innym kolorem.
"My name is Khan" is a indian drama film directed by Karan Johar. It was the highest- grossing Bollywood film overseas at the time. In the lead roles are starring Kajol and Shahrukh Khan. In my opinion it’s the most beautyful and pathetick film i’ve ever seen. It’s story about hate and love. Love not only for family and partner, but also for country and God. This film is long and the plot is very extendet. I try summarised it.
Risvan Khan is suffering from Asperger's Syndrome. It’s something like Autism- he don’t understand everything, but is very clever and very fast learn. This man is also Muslim. First of all, about religious intolerance treat this film. People think, that he’s terrorist. One day, he goes to USA. He met Mandira and he’s in loves with her. But she’s Hindu and single mother. Firstly, family don’t want to agree on the wedding, but they get married. Risvan get on very well with Mandira’s son-. Everything changes in 11 September 2001. The family is persecuted. (imię) is being killed. Mandira is angry on Risvan, because she think, that it’s him fault. She say “you can get back to me, if you says to president “My name is Khan and I’m not a terrorist”. Khan begin his difficult journey.
"My name is Khan" is a indian drama film directed by Karan Johar. It was the highest- grossing Bollywood film overseas at the time. In the lead roles are starring Kajol and Shahrukh Khan. In my opinion it’s the most beautyful(beautiful) and pathetick film i’ve ever seen. It’s story about hate and love. Love not only for family and partner, but also for country and God. This film is long and the plot is very extendet(extended). I try summarised(w tym mi coś nie pasuje) it. (summarise)
Risvan Khan is suffering from Asperger's Syndrome. It’s something like Autism- he don’t understand everything, but is very clever and very fast learn. This man is also Muslim. First of all, about religious intolerance treat this film(film talks about). People think, that he’s terrorist. One day, he goes to USA. He met (s)Mandira and he’s in loves with her. But she’s Hindu and single mother. Firstly, family don’t want to agree on the wedding, but they get married. Risvan get on very well with Mandira’s son-. Everything changes in 11 September 2001. The family is persecuted. (imię) is being killed. Mandira is angry on Risvan, because she think(thinks), that it’s him(s) fault. She say “you can get back to me, if you says to president “My name is Khan and I’m not a terrorist”. Khan begin(an) his difficult journey.(Poza tym dobrze tylko brakuje kilku przecinków)
"My name is Khan" is an Indian drama film directed by Karan Johar. It was the highest- grossing Bollywood film overseas at the time. In the lead roles are starring Kajol and Shahrukh Khan. In my opinion it’s the most beautiful and pathetic (napisalas piekny i glupi...?) film I’ve ever seen. It’s a story about hate and love. Love but not only for family and partner, but also for country and God. This film is long and the plot is very extended. I try to summarise it.
Risvan Khan is suffering from Asperger's Syndrome. It’s something like Autism- he doesn't understand everything, but is very clever and fast learning. This man is also a Muslim. First of all, the film talks about religious intolerance. People think, that he’s a terrorist. One day, he goes to USA. He meets Mandira and he’s falls in loves with her. However, she's a Hindu and a single mother. Firstly, family don’t want to agree for the wedding, but they still get married. Risvan gets on very well with Mandira’s son-. Everything changes on 1th September 2001. The family is persecuted. (imię) is being killed. Mandira is angry on Risvan, because she thinks, that it’s his fault. She says to him “You can get back to me, if you say to president “My name is Khan and I’m not a terrorist”. Khan begin his difficult journey.