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Hi SArah!
How are things?
Excuse me for so long to you didn't answer. I had no time. I tried to write back as soon as possible. I would like to tell you what happened to me lately. I was in the shop, when I saw, that a girl trying to steal a lipstick. I did not know what to do unfortunately I had, because she slowly put lipstick to his pocket. I approached her and explained to her, that it is a punishable offense. She blushed and gave lipstick in place.
I hope, that she never more this do.
What do you think? I look forward to your prompt response. Take care and see you soon.
xxx
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Starałem sie nie ingerować zbytnio w sformułowania i poprawiłem tylko błędy.
Dziwnie wygląda tu słowo "Unfortunately" - tak jakbyś nie chciał tego robić.
Zwrot "punishable offense" też wygląda dziwnie. Raczej "criminal offense" ale to chyba przesada. W cywilizowanych krajach tak surowo tego nie traktują.
Oto wersja z poprawionymi błędami i niezmienionymi sformułowaniami. Jest ok.
Hi Sarah!
How are things?
Excuse me for not answering you so long. I had no time. I tried to write back as soon as possible. I would like to tell you what happened to me lately. I was in a shop, when I saw a girl trying to steal a lipstick. I did not know what to do. Unfortunately I had to do something because she slowly put the lipstick into her pocket. I approached her and explained that it was a punishable offense. She blushed and put the lipstick back in place.
I hope, that she will never do it again.
What do you think? I look forward to your prompt response. Take care and see you soon.
xxx