Witajcie, proszę o poprawienie tego opisu/charakterystyki, wiem, że jestem noga z anglika i będzie pewnie dużo błędów językowych, błędy z czasami. Z góry dziękuję i z góry mówię, że odpowiedzi typu "wszystko ok, brak błędów itd." będą zgłaszane jako spam.
I know one person, who I can speak „ The world would be better if there were more people like him.”.
He has name Jurek. I have met him, when I had seven years. I saw him in TV. He spoke to people, today I know, that it was final “Wielka Orkiestra Świątecznej Pomocy”. He raises money for ill children ever year. I think, that it is amazing.
He has very short cut hair. Jurek never wears suit. He ever has T-shirt and jeans trousers, because he ever wears sport clothes. He can look for arrogant and primitive macho, but it isn`t true. He is sympathetic man.
He is very responsible, because Jurek controls the bigger foundation in Poland. He helps small children, because money with final, foundation buys life-saving machines for hospitals.
He is disinterested, because he doesn`t profit with him action. Him only profit is satisfaction with help for people.
Jurek is very energetic man, because during final he must be in few city in Poland. He starts in małopolska, next he flies to Poznań, Bydgoszcz, Szczecin, Wrocław and he finishes final in Warsaw.
In my opinion Jurek is first class person. I want meet him personally. I think, that people like he can change the world for better.
I know one person who is really under this what have to speak out.
The world can be better if there will be more people like him
His name is Jurek. I met him, when I was seven years. I saw him in TV. He spoke to people, today I know, that it was final “Wielka Orkiestra Świątecznej Pomocy”. He raises money for ill children every year. I think, that it is amazing.
He has very short cut hair. Jurek never wears suit. He always has T-shirt and jeans trousers, because he often wears sport clothes. He looks like an arrogant and primitive macho, but it isn`t true. He is a sympathetic man.
He is very responsible, because Jurek controls the bigger foundation in Poland. He helps small children, because money with final, foundation buys life-saving machines for hospitals.
He is disinterested, because he doesn`t profit whatever action. he only profit his satisfaction by helping people.
Jurek is very energetic man, because when he is on final he must be in few city in Poland. He starts in małopolska, next he flies to Poznań, Bydgoszcz, Szczecin, Wrocław and he finishes final in Warsaw.
In my opinion Jurek is a first class person. I want to meet him personally. I think, that people like him can change the world for a better one.
I know one person ABOUT WHOM* I can SAY "The world would be better if there were more people like him". HIS NAME IS Jurek. I met him WHEN I WAS 7 years old. I saw him ON TV while he WAS SPEAKING to people. Today I know that it was THE final OF "Wielka Orkiestra Świątecznej Pomocy". He raises money for ill children ever year. I think that it is amazing.
He has very short (cut jest zbędne) hair and never wears A suit**. Jurek always*** wears A T-shirt and jeans (trousers zbędne) because he PREFERS CASUAL STYLE. He MAY SEEM AN arrogant and rude**** macho but IT"S NOT TRUE. He is A SYMPATHETIC***** man.
Jurek is very responsible because he IS THE FOUNDER OF THE BIGGEST FOUNDATION in Poland. He ALSO helps small children AS****** he buys lifesaving machines for hospitals thanks to the money collected during finals.
He is disintersted because he...*******. HIS only profit is THE satisfaction with HELPING PEOPLE.
Jurek is A very energetic man since during finals he HAS TO VISIT SEVERAL CITIES in Poland. He starts in Małopolska, THEN he flies to Poznań, Bydgoszcz, Szczecin, Wrocław and he finishes the final in Warsaw.
In my opinion, Jurek is A PRAISEWORTHY******** man. I want TO MEET him personally. I think that people like HIM can change the world for better.
* - to dość zaawansowana konstrukcja, ale na pewno zostanie uznana jako walor językowy
** - jeśli połączysz te zdania, będzie brzmieć to lepiej
*** - miałeś na myśli, że ZAWSZE? Zatem "always"
**** - określając człowieka jako prymitywnego, lepiej użyć słówka "rude"
***** - sympathetic nie znaczy sympatyczny, tylko współczujący. Które ze znaczeń miałeś na myśli?
****** - as jest synonimem "because", użyłem go, by uniknąć powtarzania wyrazów
******* - nie potrafię rozszyfrować tego zdania. Co miałeś na myśli?
******** - first class to może być przedział w pociągu ;)
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