January 2019 0 17 Report
Sprawdzicie mi to, czy są tutaj jakieś błędy (na pewno są) i poprawicie je proszę? :)

MY GAP YEAR
I have planned my gap year for a very long time, because thisis very important to me.The main reason why i decided to do a gap year was my motivation to learn English. I really want to improve my English, because in the future I want to study abroad, and knowing English will gave me oppurtunity to do this. Also I have a chance to get a good job, because almost every company needs English-speaking people nowadays.
There are many places where i want to spend my gap year, but unfortunatly i had to choose just one, and this selection was very difficult. I chose the New York City in America, because i think this one the most beautiful city in the world. Also it always was my dream to vistit the place where dreams come true, and see all if this famous things like Brooklyn Bridge,Times Square, Central Park, Statue of Liberty and so on.
As I said, I really want to improve my English, so I need to attend an English course in some language school in New York. In my opinion, this kind of course has many upsides: Of course it is better to learn with teacher, who can explain me every difficult things. Also I won't be there alone. There will be lots of people like me, young and wanting to learn. So I can meet new friends. But I don't want to learn English all this time. I want to gain new experience, I want to learn about other cultures, people, food. That's why i would like to visit every tourist attractions in NY, I want to see as much as possible in my free time. Also I would like to go to club sometimes to meet new people, and i really want to go to the restaurant at the minimum twice a week to try every delicious dishes. Talking about restaurant, during my gap year i want to improve my cooking skills, so I would like to get a little part-time job in a restaurant, where i can learn how to cook famous American dishes like tradicional apple pie, and maybe I could earn some money.
But for all this time I need a place where I can live, and I decidet to live with a host family. I think it can be very good experience for me, bacause I will be forced to speak English with my new family, so I will be able to learn this language much faster. And all this yaer I will be part of the family, what mean that they wll include my on family events and holday celebrations, what sounds very nice, and by the way i can learn about this how American celebrate their holidays.
I hope I will enjoy my gap year and it will be a life changing experience to me. I'm so exciting, because it would be my first so long trip, and I hope everyting will go well.

Questions
1. How do you want to pay for your gap year?
I was thinking about it, and I can work a few months before my trip. Also I have savings and I'm sure that my parents will help me, if I ask them to.

2. Do you think it is good for your future?
I'm sure it is, because in America I will get a practice at speaking, I will become more self-confident and I will make new friends from different countries. Also I can get valuable experience and I will travel the world.
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