Czy są tu jakieś błędy? Jeżeli są (a na pewno są) to proszę poprawcie je :)
The story took place in the porch, where two teenagers- Bob nd Kay are sitting on the swing and they are watching the city at night.
This kind of settling usually creates a pleasant and romantic atmmosphare, becouse when we hear about two young peope sitting together on the swing at nigth,we could think about love stooory or something like this. But not this time. At the beginning the atmosphare is a little boring, because Bob and Kay are talking about Bobs cousin and school. But in the middle of the story the atmosphare becomes more tense and gloomy. The truth comes out- Bob tells Kay that he realizes she doesn't like him and she never did. He also tells he knows that Kay thinks he's stupid and he admits he comes to visit her every evening because his mother makes him to, no because he wants to. The atmosphare in the last part of the story is pretty depressing. Bob hurts Kay very much by telling her she's phony, what is even worse then being stupid, When he leaves he gives her to understand he would miss her buthe would never go back again
At the beginning the relationship between Kay and Bob was one way, what means that only one preson, in this case Bob was trying to make the relationship succesed. He wanted to talk with Kay, and he even invited her to the cinema. But as apposed to Bob, Kay wasn't too talkative and ahe was trying to push him away. The moment when Bob decidet to tell Kay the truth was the turning point of the story. After the boy told her he knows that she doesn't like him, everything changed. The relatonship between them become very honest, but also very cold. Bobs words hurted the girl very much, because she never thought Bob would see the truth and could say something as cruel as "you think you are to good for me" or call her phony. Those words touched her heart and she felt guilty. She knew she shouldn't treat Bob like she did for all this time but now is too late. Bob is not coming back again
The story took place in the porch, where two teenagers- Bob nd Kay are sitting on the swing and they are watching the city at night.
This kind of settling usually creates a pleasant and romantic atmmosphare, becouse when we hear about two young peope sitting together on the swing at nigth,we could think about love stooory or something like this. But not this time. At the beginning the atmosphare is a little boring, because Bob and Kay are talking about Bobs cousin and school. But in the middle of the story the atmosphare becomes more tense and gloomy. The truth comes out- Bob tells Kay that he realizes she doesn't like him and she never did. He also tells he knows that Kay thinks he's stupid and he admits he comes to visit her every evening because his mother makes him to, no because he wants to. The atmosphare in the last part of the story is pretty depressing. Bob hurts Kay very much by telling her she's phony, what is even worse then being stupid, When he leaves he gives her to understand he would miss her buthe would never go back again
At the beginning the relationship between Kay and Bob was one way, what means that only one preson, in this case Bob was trying to make the relationship succesed. He wanted to talk with Kay, and he even invited her to the cinema. But as apposed to Bob, Kay wasn't too talkative and ahe was trying to push him away. The moment when Bob decidet to tell Kay the truth was the turning point of the story. After the boy told her he knows that she doesn't like him, everything changed. The relatonship between them become very honest, but also very cold. Bobs words hurted the girl very much, because she never thought Bob would see the truth and could say something as cruel as "you think you are to good for me" or call her phony. Those words touched her heart and she felt guilty. She knew she shouldn't treat Bob like she did for all this time but now is too late. Bob is not coming back again
More Questions From This User See All