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Prosze o sprawdzenie poprawnosci gramatycznej. Jezeli cos nie tak prosze o poprawienie lub ulepszenie ;)

Hi

I am Whiting this mail to you beacuse I want to tell you about my favourite Holiday. Therefore the Holiday that I fond of is Valentine's Day. Mabybe first a litlle histry about this celebration. The

Saint Valentine's Day was established by Pope Gelasius I in 500 AD. Valentine's Day consisted mainly of finding chosen one heart, for example, by drawing its name from a special urn. But today this day looks and is understandign in diferent way. Everyone regard this day like a time which You can confess love to the person You Love or If You arleady done it You can do it another things for that person for example give flowers, chocolates or other gifts.If You don’t have a chosen one heart yet, you can give something for your friend. Just You are trying to make the man or woman smile thas everything which that holiday its all about. The reasnon which because I tahst my favourite holiday is that I like to be happy and more than that I like to make other peoples smilign and being joyful.

I hope You like that holiday too or if You dont You will like after you finish reading my e-mail.

Aleksandra

Answer 1

Hi

I am writing this e-mail to you, beacuse I want to tell you about my favourite Holiday. Therefore  the Holiday that I fond of is Valentine's Day. Mabybe first a litlle histry about this celebration.

The Saint Valentine's Day was established by Pope Gelasius I in 500 AD. Valentine's Day consisted mainly of finding  chosen one heart, for example, by drawing its name from a special urn. But today this day looks and is understandign in diferent way. Everyone regard this day like a time when You can confess love to the person You Love or, If You arleady done it, You can do different things for that person for example give flowers, chocolates or other gifts.If You don’t have a chosen one heart yet, you can give something  for your friend. Just You are trying to make the man or woman smile thas everything which that holiday its all about.  The reason why this is my favourite holiday is that I like to be happy and more than that I like to make other peoples smiling and being joyful.

I hope You like that holiday too or if You dont You will like after you finish reading my e-mail.