Prosze o przetlumaczenie i poprawienie troche bledow
nowadays a lot of people need some break from daily routine and they decide to lonely, hard journey Rozważmy za i przeciw takiej decyzji(jakis taki zwrot w angielskim, nie moglem znalezc).
First of all, traveling is very exciting. We can explore nature, discover something rare and special, Therefore we can feel very happy and satisfated. A do tego dumni z samego siebie . Nikt nam tego nie odbierze, cala zasluga bedzie przypisana tylko dla nas, mozemy stac sie slawni.
Moreover, some people need to be alone some time. Most of people(troche slabo bo sie powtarza) can do everything, aby tylko osiągnąć swoj cel. Most of us need to fight with teammates, because they are waiting on any mistake and want our slip( potkniecia, bledu dla wlasnych korzysci) For example my cousin Tom works in biggest bank in Warsaw, ING Bank. Everyday he must be very careful and focused on his work, because a lot of customers waiting for his gaffe and want to take easy money. On uwielbia być czasami sam, bez hałsu itd ( tu chodzi o to ze mam kuzyna tomka, ktory pracuje w banku, caly czas musi na wszystko uwazac bo ludzie tylko czekaja zeby go oszukac, jest przemeczony itd, moze mozna troche lepiej sformulowac ten przyklad, jak cos to prosze to robic)
From the other hand, lonely journey can be very dangerous. We can find a lot of scammers, unfair and bad people everywhere, that's why our trp can be very dangerous and unpleasant.
What is more, traveling alone is very expensive. we cant rely on common money and usefull things. We cant buy group tickets, borrow any tools from our mate etc.
All things considered, lonely journey is unusual adventure, but also sometimes extremly hard and dangerous.I think that is better idea to find trustfull friend and go on amazing trip with him !!
Moreover, some people need to be alone some time. MAJORITY OF PEOPLE can do everything TO ACHIEVE THEIR GOALS. Most of us need to fight with OUR teammates, because theyWAIT FOR any mistake WE SHOULD MAKE and want US TO FAIL. For example, my cousin Tom works in THE biggest bank in Warsaw, ING Bank. Everyday he must be very careful and focused on his work, because a lot of customers EXPECT HIM TO MAKE A BLUNDER, SO THEY COULD BENEFIT IT FROM IT FINANCIALLY. TOM SOMETIMES PREFERS TO BE ALONE, WITHOUT MUCH FUSS AND UNNECESSARY PERTURBATIONS.
From the other hand, lonely journey can be very dangerous. We can find a lot of scammers, unfair and bad people everywhere, that's why our TRIP can be very dangerous and unpleasant.
What is more, traveling alone is very expensive. We can't rely on common money and usefull things. - TO ZDANIE NIE MA SENSU - O CO W NIM CHODZI? We can't buy group tickets, borrow any tools from OTHER TRAVELLERS, etc.
All things considered, lonely journey is AN unusual adventure, but also sometimes extremely hard and dangerous.I think that is A better idea to find A TRUSTWORTHY friend and go on amazing trip with THEM !!