Question

Napisz list do kolegi w ktorym poinformujesz go o nowej diecie, prosze o sprawdzenie bledow i poprawienie potrzebne na poniedzialek !!

Dear Bob,
Thank you for your letter. I'm sorry i haven't written for so long, but I had a lot of work. I am writing to tell you about new diet, which help me to be more fit.

For a long time i have searched a right diet for me. Last week i saw very interesting program about helthy food. One dietician said, that most types of meat are unhealthy and people should avoid that products. Consequently I have decided to go on a vegetarian diet.
That diet relies on non-eating meat. Instead of this I eat a lot of vegetables,fruits and milk products. I am on this diet from 5 days.

I never before havent gone on any diet, so first day was the worst for me. My mother fried me a delicious steak. I couldn't eat that meal, that was terrible.However i bought for myself my favourite fruit - banana and did fresh,tasty salad with sour cream.

I like this diet, because its healthy and I feel so good. You should try that diet and tell me about it!

Well, that's all my news. Hope to hear from you.
Best wishes,
XYZ

Answer 1

Musisz pamiętać, że ja "I" musisz pisać z dużej litery.
Ja napisałabym (...) written for so long because I had (...), ale tak chyba też jest poprawnie.
Błąd w wyrazie healthy.


Reszta wg mnie jest poprawnie :)