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Few days ago my dear friend Bob went by car on a trip, to Gdansk.He wanted to know that city, because he intended to go there to study.He was driving in sunny casual morning day. Suddenly he heard a horrible snap. He looked in mirros and observed black, very luxury and expensive car and woman inside. She hited bob’s car and escaped. My friend tried to call the police, but it wasn’t usefull. Bob is very talented mechanic, so he repaired vehicle and continued his trip. Few hours later he ~~~~był już na miejscu I postanowił zarezerwować hotel~~~~. Than He refueld his vehicle and went to the Beach There he was having fun. When bob was resting on the sea, he observed two fit, strong guys. He was pretty sure, that he saw their in front of hotel, on the fuel station and on a platform. Suddenly his mobile ranked, and police officer said that they put woman, who probably caused the accident. He asked my friend to arrive on a police station. Bob very fast took their things and went. In front of doors,~~~ spotkal tych dwoch mezczyzn ktorych wczesniej widzial zatrzymalo go~~~~. They had a Deal for him: woman, who hitted his car was a wife rich boss of a company. She was drunk and she hasn’t got driver license. One guy said: “if u don’t want to make a problems, ~~~~udaj ze nie znasz tej kobiety I ze widzisz ja pierwszy raz. Mój szef kupi ci wille z i będzie placil kilka tysięcy miesięcznie za te milczenie”~~~~~~ bob accepted proposition and we are drinking cold drink In his swimming pool !!
kullubAfew days ago my dear friend Bob went by car on a trip to Gdansk.He wanted to GET TO know that city because he intended to go there to study.He was driving in A sunny casual morning day. Suddenly, he heard a horrible snap. He looked in THE mirros and NOTICED / SAW A black, LUXURIOUS and expensive car WITH A woman inside. She hit Bob’s car and escaped / DROVE AWAY / GOT AWAY. My friend tried to call the police, but it wasn’t NECESSARY. Bob is A very talented mechanic, so he repaired THE vehicle and continued his trip.A Few hours later he ARRIVED AT HIS DESTINATION POINT. THEN, HE DECIDED TO BOOK A ROOM IN A HOTEL. LATER He refueld / FILLED UP his vehicle / CAR and went to the beach. HE HAD A LOT OF FUN THERE. When Bob was resting BY the sea, he NOTICED/ SAW two STRONG AND WELL-BUILT guys. He was pretty sure, that he saw theM in front of THE hotel, AT the fuel station and on THE platform. Suddenly his mobile ranG. THE police officer said that they HAD CAUGHT THE WOMAN who MIGHT HAVE caused the accident. He asked my friend to arrive AT a police station. Bob QUICKLY COLLECTED HIS THINGS / STUFF and DROVE THERE. In front of THE POLICE STATION HE MET THE TWO MEN HE HAD SEEN BEFORE. THEY STOPPED HIM. They had a deal for him: THE woman, who hit his car was a wife OF A rich boss of a company. She was drunk and she DID NOT HAVE A driverS license. One guy said: “If u don’t want to HAVE ANY PROBLEMS PRETEND THAT YOU DON'T KNOW THIS WOMAN AND IT IS THE FIRST TIME YOU SEE HER. MY BOSS WILL BUY YOU A VILLA AND WILL PAY YOU A FEW THOUSAND EACH MONTH FOR KEEPING YOUR MOUTH SHUT. Bob accepted THIS OFFER. And NOW we are HAVING a cold drink in his swimming pool !!
Teraz powinno być lepiej. Trochę pozmieniałem, ale sens jest oddany.
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Był już na miejscu(...) - was already on place and decided to book a hotel
"Bob very fast took(...)" - powinno być: Bob took very fast(...) went też nie pasuje, powinno być GONE albo ESCAPED
"spotkał tych(...)" - he met these two men, whose he saw earlier, they caught him
udaj, że nie znasz(...) - behave like you don't know that woman and you just saw her first time. my boss will buy you a villa and you'll get paid several thousand money for this silence
Nie sprawdziłem wnikliwie całości, napisałem tylko to, co najbardziej rzuca się w oczy. Ale jest czwarta nad ranem za kwadrans, więc chyba mi wybaczysz :)
Teraz powinno być lepiej. Trochę pozmieniałem, ale sens jest oddany.
"Bob very fast took(...)" - powinno być: Bob took very fast(...) went też nie pasuje, powinno być GONE albo ESCAPED
"spotkał tych(...)" - he met these two men, whose he saw earlier, they caught him
udaj, że nie znasz(...) - behave like you don't know that woman and you just saw her first time. my boss will buy you a villa and you'll get paid several thousand money for this silence
Nie sprawdziłem wnikliwie całości, napisałem tylko to, co najbardziej rzuca się w oczy. Ale jest czwarta nad ranem za kwadrans, więc chyba mi wybaczysz :)