Question

Proszę o sprawdzenie po angielsku ,ma byc napisane na poziomie kl.5 podstawowki nie wiem czy dobrze.

James Naismith wymyślił koszykówkę. Był instruktorem wychowania fizycznego w Springfield w Massachusttes , YMCA.Wynalazł ten sport w 1891 roku. Chciał aby jego uczniowie mogli uprawiac go również zimą. Koszykówka jest grą zespołową.Po raz pierwszy zagrano w koszykówkę w marcu 1892 roku w Springfield wMassachusttes.

James Naismith invented basketball .He was an instructor of physical educationin in Springfield in Massachusttes,YMCA. He invented the sport in 1891. He wanted has students to could to practiced it in the winter too. Basketball is a team game. First played basketball in March 1892 in Springfield in Massachusttes.

Answer 1

James Naismith has invented (Present Perfect, nie wiem czy mieliście) basketball. He has been an instructor of P.E. in Springfield, Massachusetts. He invented this sport in 1891. He has wanted his students to practice it even in the winter. Basketball is a team game. Basketball has been played (strona bierna, też nie wiem czy to jest w podstawie programowej) in March 1892 in Springfield for the first time.

Answer 2

James Naismith has invented basketball. He has been an instructor in Springfield, Massachusetts. He invented this sport in 1891. He has wanted his students to practice it even in the winter. Basketball is a team game. Basketball has been played  in March 1892 in Springfield for the first time.