Proszę o sprawdzenie e-maila Dear John, How are you? I’m writing to tell you that I took part in swimming competition , at my school. I did that because I really like to swim and I wanted to check up. Can you imagine , that I won first place. Unfortunately , the event started with some trouble. I didn't took a swimming cap. Luckily , my friend hasn't started the competition, so lent me it. Unfortunately , the event started with some troubles. I have forgotten cap. Luckily , my friend hasn't started the competition, so lent me it My friends cheered with me and they carried me around a swimming pool. It was amazing. Hope to hear from you.
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Dear John, How are you? I’m writing to tell you that I took part in a swimming competition , at my school. I did that because I really like to swim and I wanted to check up. (lepiej: confirm my abilities, check on my abilities) Can you imagine that I came in first! Unfortunately , the event started with some troubles. I didn't took (did not + pierwsza forma: take) a swimming cap. Luckily , my friend hasn't started (Present Perfekt stosujemy, kiedy skutek widzimy w chwili mówienia. Tu lepiej zastosować: "my friend did not start) the competition (yet), so lent me it. Unfortunately , the event started with some troubles. I have forgotten cap. Luckily , my friend hasn't started the competition, so lent me it When I was swimming, my friends cheered with me (to cheer somebody - wiwatować, kibicować komuś, więc będzie cheered me). When it turned out that I was the first, they carried me around the swimming pool (było już o tym powiedziane, więc lepiej zastosować "the") . It was really amazing. I spent a great time there.
Musisz dać zakończenie: Do you also like to swim? Maybe you would like to go out with me to the swimming pool one day?
Hope to hear from you. Lepiej: I look forwrd to hearing from you / I am waiting for your letter
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Dear John,
How are you? I’m writing to tell you that I took part in a swimming competition , at my school.
I did that because I really like to swim and I wanted to check up. (lepiej: confirm my abilities, check on my abilities)
Can you imagine that I came in first!
Unfortunately , the event started with some troubles.
I didn't took (did not + pierwsza forma: take) a swimming cap. Luckily , my friend hasn't started (Present Perfekt stosujemy, kiedy skutek widzimy w chwili mówienia. Tu lepiej zastosować: "my friend did not start) the competition (yet), so lent me it.
Unfortunately , the event started with some troubles. I have forgotten cap. Luckily , my friend hasn't started the competition, so lent me it
When I was swimming, my friends cheered with me (to cheer somebody - wiwatować, kibicować komuś, więc będzie cheered me). When it turned out that I was the first, they carried me around the swimming pool (było już o tym powiedziane, więc lepiej zastosować "the") . It was really amazing. I spent a great time there.
Musisz dać zakończenie:
Do you also like to swim? Maybe you would like to go out with me to the swimming pool one day?
Hope to hear from you. Lepiej:
I look forwrd to hearing from you / I am waiting for your letter
Love, / xoxo
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