Question

Proszę o sprawdzenie , tylko takie uczciwe to bardzo ważne
Dear John,
How are you? I’m writing to tell you that I took part in swimming competitions , at my school.
I did that only because I really like to swim and I wanted to check out. You imagine , that won first place. Un fortunately , the event started with some trouble. I have forgotten cap. Luckily , my friend had her swimming things and I could borrow it. My friends cheered me on and carried me around swimming pool. It was amazing.
Hope to hear from you.
Love
XYZ

Answer 1

Większą część masz dobrze. :)

Answer 2

Dear John,
How are you? I'm writing to tell you that I took part ( b. możliwe, że między "took" a "part" powinno być "a", ale nie jestem pewną). I did that only because I really like to swim and I wanted to check myself out. You imagine: I won the competition. Unfortunately ( pisze się razem ), the event started with some troubles ( jeśli "some" to liczba mnoga,.więc troubles, a nie trouble). I have forgotten my cap. Luckily my friend had her swimming things and I could borrow it. My friends cheered me and carried me arounf the swimming pool. It was amazing. Hope to hear from you ( powinno być dobrze to zdanie, ale trochę mi nie pasuje, nigdy go nie używałam w takiej formie).
love
XYZ
Ogólnie dobrze ;)