Question

PROSZĘ O SPRAWDZENIE OPISU MOJEGO ULUBIONEGO MIEJSCA DAM NAJ!!!

when J was a child I had a lot of favourite places,but my most favourite place is Renner. It's a beautiful town on the west coast of French. It is situated on the river Loa.
It was founded by Vikings in the 5th century. In the 6th century the town was burned. In the 8th century Rener was already the first largest city on the west coast of French.
It's wonderful town with many interesting things to see. There are lots of bridges on the River Loa, and beautiful restaurants, museums. monuments architecture, statues and public gardens. Zoo, especially National Zoo, and great shops in Mono Street are also worth seeing. Rener is famous for culture: music, singing and dancin festivals here bring a lot of turist to the town.
There are many things to do in Rrener. People who love live music can go to piano concerts. you can sit visit the tower which was a prison three hundred years ago. Sitting a restaurant you can enjoy the sunshine, walk boats, come nad go, and try the sea food. J love play the piano and eat sea food. That's why Rener is the ideals place for me.

Answer 1

west coast of France - a nie French

"Zoo, especially National Zoo" - "Zoos, especially National Zoo" (pierwsze "zoo" powinno być w liczbie mnogiej)

'Rener is famous for culture" - ja bym to napisała "Rener is famous for its culture:"

"music, singing and dancing festivals here bring a lot of turist to the town' - ujmę to tak " music, singing and dancing festivals which bring a lot of tourists to the town'

'you can sit visit the tower' - chyba bez tego 'sit'

'sitting a restaurant' - źle ; ładniej będzie " While sitting at a restaurant"

"come and go" - w jakim znaczeniu to zostało użyte?

"I love play the piano" - 'I love to play the piano" albo "I love playing the piano and eating the sea food"

"ideals" - ideal, bez s

 

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