Sprawdzi mi ktoś opowiadanie z angielskiego? :) Prosiłabym o sprawdzenie błędów gramatycznych. I jeszcze jak jakieś zdanie można napisać lepiej, tzn w innym czasie to też prosiłabym o poprawienie tego :DWhen I woke up, I couldn't belive my eyes. I was in the dark wood. I looked around. I didn't see anyone. I couldn't remember how I found there. It was so terrbile for me. Suddenly I heard something strange. At first, I didn't know what it is and where it comes. I moved ahead. After 30 minutes of walking I saw someone in the distance. He was standing and looking at me. As soon as I approached, he began to run. I followed him and I got through the mysterious place in a moment. I felt the snow underfoot and I saw that snow was on the trees too. I felt cold. A man, whom I had just seen walked over me. He was different than normal men, whom I knew. He had a cyan hair, bright skin and he was very tall. I began to lead a conversation with him. He explained me, that I came to the land called 'Terra Nix”. I was in a shock. His name was Daveth. He gave me a warmer clothes. I was grateful to him. After this, he introduced me to the king of the land. He was similar to Daveth. I spent two days there. I visited most of the land. I met a very interesting creature. Some animals could speak. It was unusual and fascinating, but I wanted to go home. However, I didn't know how I can do it. King of the 'Terra Nix' told me, that I can't do it. There was no exit. I started to cry. Then, some woman came up to me. She asked for a meeting at this point, but at the night. I agreed. I kept my promise. The woman said that she knows how to get me out of here. I was happy about that. She pulled out her wand and spoke strange words, that sounded like a charm. Suddenly I found myself in my room. In this way my adventure was ended. I don't know whether it was true to this day. However, I hope so.
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