Question

Napisz opowiadanie zaczynające się słowami: When I enterned the room everybody look at me.

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Answer 1

When I enterned the room everybody looked  at me. Everybody started to cry. I didn't knew why. My little sister said to me: "Alex?". She looked at me hers big beautiful eyes and she started crying too. This was annoying. I cannot stand it. Then I shouted: " Everybody stop that, please! What's going on? Who's brave and say me what's going on?!"- I said. In my house was as quiet as never. Everybody stopped talking. They're only laugh quiet. Then my mum said: ALex, don't be nervous. We just... "- she didn't end. She asked my dad and older sister:" Am I saying him about...?". They just said 'Yes.". And then she said: "Alex, do you remember, that was grandmother  very sick?". I remembered it. But I only said: " She was? What's going on?". "She died"- said Dad.  "W...When? - I asked. "In the morning. The funeral's on tuesday." And then I was crying, crying and crying.After funeral I was staying next to  my grandmother's grave and I said:

My Grannie, my Dear Grannie. I always loved you. I'm sorry for my behaviour in last week. I'm sorry. I'm sorry." Dasz naj?