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Napisz opowiadanie rozpoczynające się od słów: I was alone in the house reading..

Proszę o napisanie pracy na ten temat oczywiście po angielsku. Limit slow 200-250. Pilne! Prosze o uczciwa i rzetelna prace.

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Sam pisałem, bez korzystania z translatorów. Mój poziom: I gim. Ocena z anglika: 5. Sprawdziłem pisownię i gramatykę w angielskim stylu pisania w MSOffice. Wsystko się zgadza, bez błednie, zachowałem czas przeszły i teraźniejszy. Proszę o NAJ. Z góry dziękuję. W przypadku skorygowania tekstu, proszę o kontakt GG: 6085823

 

I was alone in home reading a book about the famous serial killers. That was really interesting book. Reading a book was cancelled by weird sound going from front doors. Sound was something similar like lock picking, what sound I know from many action films. I closed my book, left it o table, stood up and slowly walk to front doors, carefully looked from wall. A man was standing in front of door. I wasn’t able to see who it is, because only what I saw was a black figure of men. I get to kitchen trying to be as silent as possible.  I get a kitchen knife, put it to my pocket.  Get my mobile phone from kitchen table. Put 911 on keyboard, and get hide on upper floor. Door finally opened. In one moment, whole lightning in home went down. It was very dark, because it was 23. I looked from upper floor, to all what happening on down. A man was walking to stairs. I was really scared. I brought out mobile phone. Light from phone showed my position. I lighted a man. I was shocked, that was my brother. I forgot that he said that he will drive to me today. I didn’t know that normal reading a book can stimulate imagination and change my brother to serial killer.