Question

Mógłby ktoś sprawdzić czy to jest poprawnie napisane ?

Hey Ann, I got back from a trip. I was in London with my mum
and dad .You will not believe what happened! When visiting London suddenly
someone came up to us. I did not know what was happening. My mother was very
happy. Found out that my aunt. She is very pretty she has blue eyes and blond
hair her name is Veronica..She was returning from shopping and she gave me
sunglasses. Unfortunately, she did not have time, but said that for the year invited me to her home for two weeks. my
mom said yes! How's your holiday?

Love xyz

Answer 1

Hey Ann,
 I got back from a trip. I was in London with my mum and dad .You will not believe what happened! During the walking, suddenly someone came up to us. I did not know what was happening. My mother was very happy. I figured out that it was my aunt. She is very pretty, she has blue eyes and blond hair, her name is Veronica.. She has just finished shopping and she gave me sunglasses. Unfortunately, she did not have time, but she said she would invite me on holiday in the next year for two weeks. My mom said yes! How's your holiday?

Answer 2

Jest dobrze. Mówię Ci, bo jestem bardzo dobra z angielskiego.