Question

Hej. Mam do was wielką prośbę, otóż: moglibyście mi poprawić te zadania z angielskiego? Chodzi mi o to czy forma jest dobra i wg, czy zdania są poprawnie ułożone pod względem gramatycznym i stylistycznym. Pomagałam sobie tłumaczem Google tak więc wątpię, że wszystko jest dobrze. Liczę na to, że za taką ilość punktów zrobicie to o co was proszę:) 1. Hi Caroline. How are you? I'm writing to you because visited my cousin. He arrived yesterday. Very long time weren't seen him. He was changed. He grew. His hair and eyes are darker. He dresses more adult, resigned from the loose and casual clothes. Now wears fashionable and elegand clothes. He became handsome! I greet, Dominika 2. Hi Jack. How are you? I'm writing to you because I was moving into a new farmhouse! Our new home is located in village. Close to my house is lake and forest. Is three bedroom, bathroom, kitchen and dining room. Is cosy and light. I really like. I greet, Dominika 3. Hi Rebecca. How are you? I'm writing to you because we had event at school. It was women's day. The event took place this thursday. The boys have prepared presents for girls. I was very happy, because I also got present. I think that come the next event. I greet, Dominika 4. Hi Alex. How are you? I'm writing to ypu because I get a job on holiday. I work as assistant hairdresser. Yesterday I finish a job successfully. People at work are friendly. Earned money I spent on clothes an cosmetics. I greet, Dominika 5. Hi Bonnie. How are you? I'm writing tou you because I faund a hobby. I started to draw. Everyone from the school they wont I drew them. So that I have met many friends. One of them invited me to party. I don't know what i have to wear, advise me? I greet, Dominika 6. Hi Max. How are you? I'm writing to you because asked me about a recipe for some interesting food. I think that recipe for pancakes will be right for you. Ingredients: - 500g of flaur - 2 eggs - 200ml of milk - jam - 50g of oil Mix flour with 2 eggs. Add in milk and blend for 10 minutes. Pour the mixture slowly on the hot oil on the frying pan. When it's ready, smear the jam on the pancakes. Enjoy your meal. I greet, Dominika 7. Hi Peter. How are you? I'm writing to you because Katherine will be celebrate birthday this saturday. So how about we boy a present for her together, maybe on friday? I thought that a book, but what do you think. I don't know where the bookshop. You know the city better than me. Write suck soon. I greet, Dominika

Answer 1

1. Hi Caroline. How are you? I'm writing to you because visited my cousin. He arrived yesterday. Very long time weren't seen him. He was changed. He grew. His hair and eyes are darker. He dresses more adult, resigned from the loose and casual clothes. Now wears fashionable and elegand clothes. He became handsome! I greet, Dominika

 

*Caroline- powinno być Carolina

*weren`t - wydaje mi się że powinno być wasn`t bo chodzi o osobę l.poj (3) on

 

Masz odmianę:

I`m was

you were

she/he/it was

 

We were

you were

they were

 

 

2. Hi Jack. How are you? I'm writing to you because I was moving into a new farmhouse! Our new home is located in village. Close to my house is lake and forest. Is three bedroom, bathroom, kitchen and dining room. Is cosy and light. I really like. I greet, Dominika

 

Tu jest wszystko wporządku.

 

 

3. Hi Rebecca. How are you? I'm writing to you because we had event at school. It was women's day. The event took place this thursday. The boys have prepared presents for girls. I was very happy, because I also got present. I think that come the next event. I greet, Dominika

 

Tu też jest wporządku.

Tu poprawnie napisałaś was a nie were. Czyli dobrze.

 

4. Hi Alex. How are you? I'm writing to ypu because I get a job on holiday. I work as assistant hairdresser. Yesterday I finish a job successfully. People at work are friendly. Earned money I spent on clothes an cosmetics. I greet, Dominika

 

*ypu- nie wiem co to ale chyba miało być zamiast tego to Ciebie czyli you.

 

5. Hi Bonnie. How are you? I'm writing tou you because I faund a hobby. I started to draw. Everyone from the school they wont I drew them. So that I have met many friends. One of them invited me to party. I don't know what i have to wear, advise me? I greet, Dominika

 

 

6. Hi Max. How are you? I'm writing to you because asked me about a recipe for some interesting food. I think that recipe for pancakes will be right for you. Ingredients: - 500g of flaur - 2 eggs - 200ml of milk - jam - 50g of oil Mix flour with 2 eggs. Add in milk and blend for 10 minutes. Pour the mixture slowly on the hot oil on the frying pan. When it's ready, smear the jam on the pancakes. Enjoy your meal. I greet, Dominika

 

Tu jest wporządku.

 

7. Hi Peter. How are you? I'm writing to you because Katherine will be celebrate birthday this saturday. So how about we boy a present for her together, maybe on friday? I thought that a book, but what do you think. I don't know where the bookshop. You know the city better than me. Write suck soon. I greet, Dominika

 

Tu też w porządku.

 

Podzieliłam sobie na części żebym niczego nie przegapiła.

Zdania są poprawne.

Jest kilka błędów.Napisałam Ci jakie i jak je zmienić.

Więc zmień tylko to a reszte pszepisz jak leci.

Mam nadzieję że pomogłam.

Liczę na naj..:)

 

Jeśli masz jakieś pytania to napisz..:D