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The story starts on the swimming pool at almost 6 o'clock, when the man telling the stoey meets the man from the South. They sit at the table and they talk about American boys playing together in the pool. After a while one of the boys and one English girl sitnext to the talking men. The boy offers the cigarettes to everyone sitting at the table, also he wants to give them a light. Everything begins when the youn man assures, that his lighter never fails. Admittedly no one cares,if it is true or not, but the man from the South wants to know,if american boy lie. To make sure about it, he proposes a little bet, on whether boys lighter always is s dependable. Now the boy needs to improve, that he can light his lighter of 10 times, one after another. That is the bet. If he dothis, without missing once, he will win a Cadilac, which belongs to the man from the South. Bit if he won't be lucky and he lose, the old man will cut boys little finger. It is easy - boy wins, he takes the car, he loses, man takes the finger. The young American is a little scared, but he takes that crazy and absurd bet, because he is sure, thathis lighter won't fail. They decide to do this now. So the man leds all young boy, English girl and the storys narrator to his hotels room, and in short time with maids help he preapars everything needed to the bet. After conversation about this, what will in a moment happen, the old man ties boys hand to the table ,so that the boy couldn't hold it out. Now, when they are ready, the game starts. The boy lights his lighter, and the storys narrator, as a referee counts outloud. The eight time he stopes, because somethig unexpected happens. Some unknown and very mad woman runs into the hotels room and she starts to shouting old mans name and she shakes him vigorously. When she calms down and gets off mens back,she starts toexplain shocked people what is going on. It turnes out, that this woman is old mens wife, and that this man is dangerous. Woman tells that her husband made in the past many crazy bets with different people, and because of this they lost their fingers, or he lost cars.
The story starts on the swimming pool at almost 6 o'clock, when the man telling the stoey meets the man from the South. They sit at the table and they talk about American boys playing together in the pool. After a while one of the boys and one English girl sitnext to the talking men. The boy offers the cigarettes to everyone sitting at the table, also he wants to give them a light. Everything begins when the youn man assures, that his lighter never fails. Admittedly no one cares,if it is true or not, but the man from the South wants to know,if american boy lie. To make sure about it, he proposes a little bet, on whether boys lighter always is s dependable. Now the boy needs to improve, that he can light his lighter of 10 times, one after another. That is the bet. If he dothis, without missing once, he will win a Cadilac, which belongs to the man from the South. Bit if he won't be lucky and he lose, the old man will cut boys little finger. It is easy - boy wins, he takes the car, he loses, man takes the finger. The young American is a little scared, but he takes that crazy and absurd bet, because he is sure, thathis lighter won't fail. They decide to do this now. So the man leds all young boy, English girl and the storys narrator to his hotels room, and in short time with maids help he preapars everything needed to the bet. After conversation about this, what will in a moment happen, the old man ties boys hand to the table ,so that the boy couldn't hold it out. Now, when they are ready, the game starts. The boy lights his lighter, and the storys narrator, as a referee counts outloud. The eight time he stopes, because somethig unexpected happens. Some unknown and very mad woman runs into the hotels room and she starts to shouting old mans name and she shakes him vigorously. When she calms down and gets off mens back,she starts toexplain shocked people what is going on. It turnes out, that this woman is old mens wife, and that this man is dangerous. Woman tells that her husband made in the past many crazy bets with different people, and because of this they lost their fingers, or he lost cars.
karolina7920
Dla mnie też jest ok.
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martynaposluszn
Wydaje sie ok ;-) Nie widzę błędów bo jestem kiepska
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