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Czy sprawdzi ktoś czy mam to dobrze napisane i proszę o poprawienie błędów. z góry dzięki :) Excuse me for so long that you have not written but I went for two weeks to visit my grandmother and then I had a lot of science. Everything is in order. In my grandmother in the countryside was wonderful. I met many people. And in school? A lot of learning and checking. I have great news. You know that this singer is Damien Rice released a new album. I have to have. On this album is the most beautiful song I've ever listened to "The Blower's Daughter." Also I suggest you buy it, is wonderful. Anyway, how are you doing? like in school? I heard that you changed your hair color to red. Still want to go to the gym? Oh, before I forget, Daniel spoke to gave you that has your book and wants to bring them on Friday. And remember that on Saturday we go to the cinema. I must go now, because tomorrow I have to write on the development of English. Say hi to mom. Write back soon Carolina

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W tym pierwszym zdaniu chodzi ci o to że ty przepraszasz że nie pisalaś do kogoś przez długi czas tak ? więc może być tak : I'm sorry I haven't written to you so long but I went to visit my grandmother for two weeks, and then I had a lot of studying. ( następne zdanie spoko ) w kolejnym może być : I spent a wonderful time at my grandmother in the countryside. I met many people. And what about school? I have got a lot of learning and many tests ( jesli o to chodzilo. ) I have a great news ! You know, that this singer, Damien Rice released his new album. I need to have it. On this album is the most beautiful song I've ever listened to "The Blower's Daughter." Also I suggest you to buy it, it's wonderful. Anyway, how are you doing? like in school? I've heard that you changed your hair color to red. Do you Still want to go to the gym? Oh, before I forget, Daniel said to gave you that has your book and wants to bring them on Friday(? nie rozumiem ) . And remember that on Saturday we are going to the cinema. I must go now, because tomorrow I have to write on the development(?) of English. Say hi to your mom. Write back soon. Carolina