Question

Czy może mi ktos sprawdzić czy mam dobrze napisaną notatke po angielsku?

I my country there are a lot of groups at young people called Chavs. Older people doesn't like this kind of gangs, because they doesn't feel save on the streets.
How recognize the Chavs? Well it is very easy thing to do. First of all they wear a tracksuits most of the time. Another characteristic thing are white trainers. Also a lot of them are wearing a jewellery like gold chains called in their slang golds
Almost every Chav listen to hip-hop or rap. They are fans this kind of music. They doesn't like punk and metal. Sometimes they doesn't like police.
Chavs are usually turns around, drinking some drinks or watching match their favourite football team. They doesn't going to the cinema or on the concert ( exclusion their favourite rapers concerts). Also they are big fans of polish tootball.

Answer 1

I my country there are a lot of groups of young people called Chavs. Older people don't like this kind of gangs, because they don't feel safe on the streets. How to recognize the Chavs? Well it is very easy thing to do. First of all they wear tracksuits most of the time. Another characteristic thing are white trainers. Also a lot of them are wearing a jewellery like gold chains called golds in their slang. Almost every Chav listens to hip-hop or rap. They are fans of this kind of music. They don't like punk and metal. Sometimes they don't like police.

 

Nie wiem co chciałaś powiedzieć w tym zdaniu "Chavs are usually turns around..." jak już coś, to powinno być "are usually turning", ale to i tak jest bez sensu: "Chavsi zazwyczaj obracają się"? Jeśli chciałaś powiedzieć "kręcą się", w sensie, że łażą w kółko, to użyj "walk around" albo "hang around".