bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie tego pod względem gramatycznym!
At present, people listen to different music, some classic rock others. Everyone listens to what he likes and what style he identifies. I will show the pros and cons, and how we dress tells us what music we listen to.
First of all, I think that you can not judge people on the clothes, anybody can listen to heavy rock, and every day to dress smartly, and someone who wears tracksuits do not have to listen to hip hop.
Moreover, there are people who listen to many types of music are often very different from each other, but not dressed only in clothes from one musical style.
In addition, for many people, music has no bearing on what to wear, they just follow the generally available in every store fashion.
Of course, there are people who we meet on the streets dressed up as the music they listen to, but I think these are isolated cases, they are visible to us, because they often stand out, but that does not mean that everyone listening to this music have to dress that way.
I do not agree with the statement A way you dress tell sus what you listen to music, because people are buying their clothes more often driven by the fashion than music listening.
moim zdaniem jest dobrze , tekst układa się w jedną całośc i mają one sens , ucze się anglika od 8 lat więc jest ok ;]