Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie mojej pracy na język angielski, DAJĘ NAJ. Treść zadania brzmi: opisz swoje ulubione miejsce do nauki.
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I am a person who can study with noise so I love to sit in my father's room which is located between kitchen and my own room. This location helps me when I need a quick break.
There are always people talking about something and a fantastic TV which is always turn on. There is also a big window just in front of me that I can look over the house and see what is happening outside. Not to mention these extremely comfortable chairs! Next thing I love is laptop which is always near to me. That's really convenient because I don't have to bother my self with searching some important informations by phone or iPod. What's more, the light is perfectlly bright for reading. A huge desk, standing next to my favourite chair, is so big that I can lay down all my books and there's still a hole space.
By the way, this place is so cosy that my state of mind is better there than anywhere else. Thanks to that I'm quite productive!
I love listening music while studying and there I can! In my father's room is a great radio which helps me focus on important things if I need this.
Moreover, it doesn't take me a lot of time to find my things because I know this place pretty well. That's why I really like to be somewhere I know and I feel comfortable.
All this things make my father's room an ideal place for my studies.
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Bardzo proszę o dokładne sprawdzenie i poprawki w tym tekście. Bardzo mi na tym zależy :)
Daję naj za najlepszą pracę :)
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I am a person who can study with noise so I love to sit in my father's room which is located between the kitchen and my own room. This location helps me when I need a quick break.
There are always people talking about something and a fantastic (czemu fantastic? to trochę dziwnie brzmi :P) TV which is always turned on. There is also a big window just in front of me so I can look out of the house and see what is happening outside. Not to mention these extremely comfortable chairs! The next thing I love is my laptop which is always near me. That's really convenient because I don't have to bother myself with searching for some important information by phone or iPod. What's more, the light is perfectly bright for reading. A huge desk, standing next to my favourite chair, is so big that I can lay down all my books and there's still a lot of space left.
By the way, this place is so cosy that my state of mind is better there than anywhere else. Thanks to that, I'm very productive!
I love listening to music while studying and there I can do that! In my father's room there is a great radio which helps me focus on important things if I need to.
Moreover, it doesn't take me a lot of time to find my things because I know this place pretty well. That's why I really like to be in a familiar place where I feel comfortable.
All these things make my father's room an ideal place for my studies.
Ogólnie ładnie napisane :)