Jest to opowiadaie na angielski pt "Fortunate mistake". prosiłabym o poprawienie błędów. Zachowałam odzielnosć akapitów, co jest także ważne. Błędów będzie dużo, ostrzegam. Z góry dziękuje :)
It was windy and raining day when I go to home. It was autumn, so it was very cold. I had a long way to home, so I decided to take the bus.
While I waited at the bus stop, hail began to fall. I was frozen, because I don’t have a thick jacket. By my mistake, got a cold. I was shaking from the cold.
I was exhausted and I want go to home now! I wanted to cry and I was all wet. Suddenly, a men came to me. He is handsome! This a wonderful man had a umbrella. He handed it to me and said “Take it, because you more get wet”. I smiled for/at him(do niego) him and thanked him. We began talk about everything. Conversation was very nice. After ten minutes, the bus arrived and I went to the home.
He walked(mam na myśli, że mnie odprowadził) me at home, and I gave him my phone number. At the end he kissed me on the cheek. Next day man who helped me wrote SMS to me. He invited me to date. I was very excited! I really like him. Thanks to this fortunate mistake I gained a great boyfriend.
It was a windy and rainy day when I was going home. It was autumn, so it was very cold. I had a long way to home, so I decided to catch the bus.
While I was waiting at the bus stop, the hail began to fall. I was frozen, because I didn't have jacket. I was quavering with cold because of my mistake.
I was exhausted and I wanted go home at once! I wanted to cry and I was all wet. Suddenly, a man walked up to me. He was handsome! That a wonderful man had an umbrella. He gave it me and said “Took it, because I could get wet”. I smiled at him and thanked him. We started to talk. Conversation was very nice. After ten minutes, the bus arrived and I went home.
He took me home, and I gave him my phone number. At the end he kissed me on the cheek. Next day a man who helped me , wrote me an SMS . He invited me on the date. I was very excited! I really like him. Thanks to this fortunate mistake I met a great boyfriend.
Proszę ;)
It was A windy and RAINY day when I was coming back home. It was autumn, so it was very cold. I had a long way to home, so I decided to take the bus.
While I was waiting at the bus stop, a hail began to fall. I was frozen, because I didn’t have a thick jacket. I WAS QUIVERING WITH COLD because of my mistake.
I was exhausted/worn out and I wanted to go home immediately ! I wanted to cry and I was all wet. Suddenly, a man appeared next to me. He WAS sohandsome!That wonderful man had an umbrella. He handed it over to me and said “Take it, otherwise you would get soaked to the skin in the rain”. I smiled at him and thanked him. We began to talk/talking about everything. The conversation was very nice. After ten minutes, the bus arrived and I went home.
He saw me to the door and I gave him my phone number. At the end he kissed me on the cheek. Next day a man who helped me, wrote me an SMS. He invited me on a date. I was very excited! I really like him. Thanks to this fortunate mistake I got a great boyfriend.