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Dear Ben

Hi! How are you? I hope you're well. I'll tell you sobething about myself and my hobbies.

I have lot of hobbies. Example I collect stamps just like my dad wehn he was young. I'm very crazy about volleyball, maybe some day I'll play in our scholl team. Moreover I love spending free time with my best friend. What's more I like listen to the music my favourite bands are: Simple plan and Green day, but my parents can't stand my favourite music always when they hear it they are getting nervous.

I hate watch TV: I prefer biking or jogging to being alone in small room. I'm not too found of going to the museum it's always very boring.

I think it's all about me and my interests. Please write something about you.

Take care and write soon.

Milena

Answer 1

Nie sobething tylko something , wehn-when , schol-school , Chyba reszta dobrze.

Answer 2

Dear Ben,

Hi! How are you? I hope you're well. I'll (lepiej by brzmiało "I want to tell you") tell you something about myself and my hobbies.

I have a lot of hobbies. For example I collect stamps just like my dad when he was young. I'm very (albo "completely"? :) crazy about volleyball, maybe some day I'll play in our scholl team. Moreover, I love spending free time with my best friend. What's more, I like to listen to (wykasowałam "the") music. My favourite bands are: Simple plan and Green day but my parents can't stand my favourite music. Every time they hear it they get nervous. (Lub "When they hear it they always get nervous". Jeśli tu użyjesz "are always getting nervous" to będzie znaczyło, że ich nerwy i Ciebie denerwują ;))

 

I hate watching TV. I prefer biking or jogging, to be (bez "ing") alone in a small room. I'm not too (nie lepiej "very"?) fond of going to (bez "the") museums.It's always very boring.

 

I think it's all about me and my interests. Please write something about you.

 

Take care and write soon,

Milena

 

A tak poza tym to świetny list ;)