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Witam, potrzebuje zeby mi ktos to sprawdzil :) poprawil istniejace bledy i wymyslil koncowke (1 zdanie wystarczy). I przetlumaczyl podkreslone zdania na jezyk angielski w odpowiedniej formie ;) z gory dzieki :* Daje naj ;d

My name is Kaja.I was born in Cracow, Poland sixteen years ago. When I was young I liked play volleyball.When I was seven years old, I was studied in first school/w szkole podstawowej.Where I knew a lot of wonderfull peoples,z ktorymi przyjaźnię się do dziś.When I was 13 years old, I was started study in this school.Places I've been to Italy, Germany and Spain. Now I studying and spotykam sie z przyjaciolmi, and I playing volleyball. In the future I will probably finish the school. I will psychologiem i find great job, and I get married.Będę pomagać ludziom w trudnych sytuacjach. I want have got tree childrens, and a lot of friends. I will live in Sopot, because I like Baltic Sea.

Answer 1

My name is Kaja.I was born in Cracow in Poland amd I'm sixteen years ago. When I was young I liked play volleyball.When I was seven old, I was studied at primary school. Where I knew a lot of wonderfull people, who I knew today/.When I was 13 years old, I was started study in the secondary school. I've been to Italy, Germany and Spain. Now I'm studying and I'm meeting, and I'm playing volleyball. In the future I'm going to finish  school. I want to work as psychologist, find great job, and I want to get married. I will help people in hard situation. I want to have three childrens, and a lot of friends. I will live in Sopot, because I like Baltic Sea. But now I must study hard, because I want to have good-paid job. 

 

Troszke błędów, nie zapominaj, że w czasie present continous jak masz oosobę to po niej musi być zawsze odmiana TO BE np I  AM PLAYING FOOTBALL, HE IS Playing football i tak dalej :]

 

 

Answer 2

My name is Kaja. I was born in Cracow sixteen years ago.

When i was young i liked to play volleyball.

When I  was seven I went to primary school.

Wher i knew lots of great people wich later I became friends with.

When i was thirteen years old i started to study in this school .

I've been to Italy, Germany and Spain before.

Now I'm studying and playing and hanging around with my friends.

In the futer i want to be a  psychologist and find a good job.

Get married and have three kids.

I will help people in  difficult situations .

I will live in Sopot, because i like Baltic see.

 

sory ale troche pozmienialem w kolejnosci :P