Question

Tolong bantu apakah tenses nya sudah benar sesuai degn kaidah postcard? bntuuu yaaaaaa

dear ica,
how are you? I hope you fine. last holiday, My family and I went to Jatinunggal dam. there we enjoyed the view, the water was very swift irrigate. We do not forgot to taken pictures. we felt happy. how about a holiday in your grand mother? I hope you're happy.
your friend,
Rizki Amalia

Answer 1

Dear Ica,
How are you? I hope you are fine. Last holiday, my family and I went to Jatinunggal dam. We enjoyed the view, the water was very swift. We didn't forget to take pictures. We felt happy. How was about your holiday at your grandmother's house? I hope you were happy.

Your friend,
Rizki Amalia