Sprawdźcie mi to, pod względem gramatycznym, sensowym, słówek. Nie piszcze że wszysko ok, bo wiem, że tak nie jest.
Generation gap- it is conflicts between older and younger people. Teenagers often wear odd clothes, listen to another music, have different values and different ways of spending their free time from their parents. Adults don’t ( uświadamiac sobie) realize that the young don’t want to be still under control - Teenagers want make choices, solve problems and buy clothes without the help of parents. Although parents try to understand their children, they often do it in a wrong way. They can’t talk to their son or daughter, because they don’t want to listen to them. Adults often forget, that they also were young and made many mistakes. They punish their children for being late or bad notes and then the young isolate themselves from parents, often there are days when children and parents don’t talk each other. ( zamiast ) Instead of punishing, adults should talk with teenagers, have serious discussions, explain to them why they are not let to do some things. They should to be friends for their children.
Adolescence has advantages and disadvantages.
. EVERYBODY WANTS TO be TRENDY and fashionable. A lot of girls TRY TO lose weight TO be MORE BEAUTIFUL. Plenty of people have started smoke, used drags and drank ALCOHOL when they was teenagers . They must be strong and don’t be susceptide to influence
- The have MANY problems: TROUBLES with A girlfriend or A boyfriend; - we HAVE TO MAKE DECISIONS about our LIVES and future.
They often have a problem with parents. They don't UNDERSTAND their parents and parents don't understand them.
Disadvantages of Adolescence
They DO NOT HAVE TO work and worry about LIVING COSTS.
+ They have a lot of free time FOR ENTERTAINMENT and HOBBIES. We can spend this time with OUR FRIENDS.
+ They CAN DO SILLY things AND NOBODY WILL NOTICE IT
+ We can LEARN a lot of new things
+ EVERYONE HAS a MOBILE phone
+ We can grow our knowledge
+ We can earn money in SEASONAL JOBS.
Childhood
Many people believe that childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. However, this period has advantages and disadvantages.
The most important advantage of childhood is that at this time we do not have any obligations and we are not responsible for anything. Childhood is a time when it's all good fun, we don’t must a lot o learn, and we don’t go to school. We can eat a lot of sweats, we also can sleep long. All the time somebody play with us, we have a lot of toys. At the age of 3 to 6 years we do not have any worries and problems. parents do for us all. They try to help us in every difficult situation.
However childhood also many disadvantages.
The main disadvantages include childhood that we can’t make any decisions for themselves, everything is decided by our parents, we have plenty of bans . The child can’t read, write and they must go to bed early.
"Generation gap- it is conflicts between older and younger people." - Generation gap - it is conflict between old and young people
"Teenagers want make choices," - Teenagers want ro make choices
"They can’t talk to their son or daughter, because they don’t want to listen to them." - dla mnie to zdanie trochę nie ma sensu w kontekście
"Adults often forget, that they also were young and made many mistakes" - Adults often forget that they also were young and were making mistakes.
"They punish their children for being late or bad notes" - They punish their children for being late or for bad notes.
"why they are not let to do some things" - why they don't let them do some things
"They should to be friends for their children." - They should be friends with their children
"Adolescence has" - Adolescence has got
"have started smoke, used drags and drank ALCOHOL" - have started smoking, using drugs and drinking alcohol
"They must be strong and don’t be susceptide to influence" - They must be strong and don’t be susceptible to influence
"this period has advantages and disadvantages" - this period has got advantages and disadvantages
"Childhood is a time when it's all good fun, we don’t must a lot o learn" - childhood is a time when it's godd fun all the time, we don't have to learn a lot.
"All the time somebody play with us" - Somebody is playing with us all the time
"we have a lot of toys." - we have got a lot of toys
"parents do for us all" - parents do everything for us
"However childhood also many disadvantages" - However childhood has got also many disadvantages
"The main disadvantages include childhood that we can’t make any decisions for themselves" - The main disadcantage is that we can't make any decision for ourselves
"we have plenty of bans" - we have got plenty of bans
Mam nadzieję, że się przyda. Nie jestem na 100% pewna poprawności, ale wydaje mi się, że teraz jest dobrze.