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Nowadays schools for the elite are become more popular than several years ago. A lot of people think that schools for elite is better than public schools, but schools for the elite have a lot of advantages and disadvantages, so schools for elite are good idea?
Firstly, some people can feel better than other because they are graduated from this school. It is bad because everybody are equal.
Secondly, it seems to me that the most important is knowledge, not diploma from a renowned university, but unfortunately this often guarantees good job.
On the other hand, if somebody learns very good he will get the scholarship and he can attend to school for the elite.
Firstly, schools for the elite often has rich tradition. In this schools students learn history and have respect of tradition. Nowadays in my opinion is very important.
Finally I think that the schools for the elite to create a lot of rivalry. Students are ambitious, hard-working and they are rivalry between us. I think this is positive because people can develop.
All in all, are pros and cons schools for the elite, but I think that schools for the elite is good idea because people who are determined get to this schools. In the future graduates schools for the elite will have good job but I think that they deserve for it.
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Nowadays, schools for the elite have become more popular than ever before. Many people think that schools for the elite are better than public schools. However, schools for the elite have some disadvantages, as well. So, are the schools for the elite a good idea?
Firstly, some people can feel better than others because they graduated from this type of school. It is bad because all people are equal.
Secondly, I think that the most important thing is knowledge, and not diploma from a renowned university. Unfortunately, often only the latter guarantees a good job.
On the other hand, if somebody learns well, they will get the scholarship and can attend a school for the elite.
Thirdly, schools for the elite often have rich traditions. In this type of schools students learn history of their school and acquire respect for its traditions. Nowadays, in my opinion, it is very important.
Finally, I think that the schools for the elite create a lot of rivalry. Students are ambitious, hard-working and they compete to get better grades and better jobs. I think this is positive because people can develop. All in all, there are pros and cons of schools for the elite, but I think that it is good that there are such schools, because there are people who are determined to go there. In the future graduates of the schools for the elite will have good jobs but I think that they deserve it.