proszę o sprawdzenie i skorygowanie ewentualnych błędów
Today day was very quiet.Firstly I had polish lesson.I read and analysed verse.Secondly I had Maths.We wrote very difficult class test.Nex I have ate others cake, because we had lesson about confectionery and now I am full up.After school I went to home.I run twice a week and I lead healthy way of life.I hope that I throw down today calories.I think thai it was been pleasant day and now I going to go sleep.
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Today day was very quiet. Firstly I had polish lesson. I read and analysed verse. Secondly I had Maths. We wrote very difficult class test. Next I have ate others cake, because we had lesson about confectionery and now I am full up. After school I went to home. I run twice a week and I lead healthy way of life. I hope that I throw down today calories. I think that it was been pleasant day and now I going to go sleep.
*Secondly- ja bym tu zmienila na przykladowo "then" czyli następnie
*class bym wyrzucila (zbyteczne moim zdaniem)
*Next I have ate others cake zmienilabym na: Next I ate cake with friends (nie musi byc friends jesli nie chcesz, mozesz wpisac kogo chcesz)
*up zmien na of
*wydaje mi sie ze "today" bedzie na koncu ale nie mam stu procentowej pewnosci
Liczę na naj :)