Question

Proszę o sprawdzenie, czy wszystko jest pozmieniane logicznie, w dobrej kolejności i czy czegoś nie zabrakło.

Miałam zmienić na czas PRESENT SIMPLE, w 3 os. l. poj.

ORYGINALNY TEKST W ZAŁĄCZNIKU.(tylko ten zaznaczony w czerwonej ramce)

ZMIENIONY PONIŻEJ:

He usually works in England but sometimes He works abroad too.
When he doesn't works, He likes go to the cinema and eat in nice restaurants.
He doesn't very sporty and he doesn't any excercise, but at least he doesn't smokes.
He likes intelligent, funny women who makes his laugh, and ideally who love music.
Physically He prefers women with dark hair who doesn't taller than his.

Answer 1

He usually works in England but sometimes He works abroad too.
When he ISN'T WORKING, he likes GOING to the cinema and EATING in nice restaurants.
He ISN'T very sporty and he doesn't DO any excercise, but at least he doesn't SMOKE.
He likes intelligent, funny women who makes HIM laugh, and ideally who love music.
Physically he prefers women with dark hair who AREN'T taller than HE.