Question

Proszę o sprawdzenie błędów (gramatyki) i ewentualne poprawienie.

Hi Ola. I heard that your mom go on peacekeeping missions to refugee camps. It's fantastic! In the future I would like to work alone in such a place. It must be a very interesting job. I would love to learn more about living in this camp, so if it's not a problem - my mother asked me on my behalf?
It would be best if you had the whole family came to the Polish in the holidays! What do you say?
I greet you warmly and firmly embrace. I hope to see you soon.

Answer 1

It would be best if you had the whole family came to the Polish in the holidays!

JEsli masz na mysli . 'jesli ty chcesz przyjedz do polski z rodzina na wakacje'

to masz cos nie tak tu bo had to czas przesły wiec

If u want I'd like that u came to poland in the holiday with your family .