Question

Proszę, aby ktoś kto DOBRZE potrafi angielski sprawdził mi moje wypociny, tzn. e-mail do nauczyciela. Żeby to jakoś sensownie brzmiało... Z góry dziękuję.

Dear Mr XXX,

Thank you for your last e-mail. I’m writing to you because I make a move to Warsaw. I live in center of the capital. Warsaw is a beautiful and big city. My house is conveniently located. There is easy access to supermarket, swimming pool and cinema. From my window I can see a hug park and a pond[staw]. I am very happy with my decision to live in this city. I met two friends, Kasia and Julia. They are so funny. I like them. I’m glad, because I have a good contact with my neighbors. I’m stressed. There is too much stuff in my head. I hope that we will finish renovated house soon. I and my parents are invited you to a barbecue. The party will start on July 15 at 4 p.m. I hope you will come. I will send you our address in the next email. That’s all about me. How are You?

Write soon,

XYZ.

Answer 1

I’m glad.. jeżeli e-mail jest ''poważny'' to nie powinno być skrótów,wydaje mi się ,że nie popełniłaś błędów..

Answer 2

Dear Mr XXX,

Thank you for your last e-mail. I’m writing to you because I moved to Warsaw. I live in center of the capital. Warsaw is a beautiful and big city.  My house is conveniently located. There is easy access to supermarket, swimming pool and cinema. From my window I can see a huge park and a pond. I am very happy with my decision to live in this city. I met two friends, Kasia and Julia. They are funny. I like them. I’m glad, because I have a good contact with my neighbors. I’m stressed. There is too much stuff  in my head. I hope that we will finish renovated house soon. Me and my parents wants to invite you to a barbecue. The party will start on July 15 at 4 p.m. I hope you will come. I will send you our address in the next email. That’s all about me. How are You?

I hope you will reply soon,

XYZ.