pilne !!! witam bardzo bym prosił o sprawdzenie mi artykułu z angielskiego "The marriage formerly and now" Nowadays the marriage is less and less regarded ,whereas previously it was the largest institution of life. it was simple "marriage to death".People associated with it all their future.Parents of the angaged couples sought to do everything to organize wedding in the best way possible The wedding was very traditional and preapred for a olng time.In addition in the old days people really believed that their relationships can be timelessand actually they were right because in most causes marriages were succesfull In our times people treat their relationships more leniently.Obviously marriage is still very important, but equally often failed. the reason of such failure can be getting married for money or working all the time. Unfortunately these problems can easily bring about diworce
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Nowadays, (przecinek) the marriage is less and less respectable/reputable (szanowany, uważany) ----> Sprawdź znaczenie słowa - regard ( nijak pasuje) <----- ,
whereas previosuly it was the most important issue in life (poprzednio małżeństwo było najbardziej ważną kwestią w życiu). (the largest institution - najdłuższą instytucją życia? )
It was simply considered as 'marriage to the death'.
People considered that the marriage is connected with their future . (associate - zły czasownik)
enagaged (angaged - niepoprawna pisownia)
sought (nie ten czasownik) ---> tried, attempted
in the best possible way ( w tej kolejności)
In addition, (przecinek)
in the old days wyrzuć, bo wiadomo, że piszesz o przeszłości
they were right, (przecinek)
successful (właściwa pisownia)
In present times, (wyrzuć our)
Obviously,
but often fails, too (failed czas przeszły, a piszesz o teraźniejszości, wyrzuć equally)
Unfortunately,
bring about wyrzuć, wstaw cause (powodować)
divorce przez 'v'
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The marriage formerly and now". Nowadays, the marriage is less and less regarded ,whereas previously it was the most immportant institution of life. It was simply considered as "marriage to the death". .People considered with this all their future. Parents of the engaged couples tried to do everything, to organize wedding in the best possible way .The wedding was very traditional and preapred for a long time. In addition in the old days people really believed that their relationships can be timelessand actually they were right because in most causes marriages were successful In their times people treat their relationships more leniently.Obviously, marriage is still very important, but equally often fails. The reason of such failure can be getting married for money or working all the time. Unfortunately, these problems can easily bring about divorce.