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"The editor of your sixth form college magazine has invited you to write an article suggesting ways for students to resist peer pressure. Write your article for the magazine (200-250 words)".
Peer pressure
Peer pressure is big problem among teenagers. A lot of young people can’t handle it and it causes stress, feeling of being inferior and others. What can you do, then, to resist peer pressure ? To start with, you should choose your friend carefully. By doing this you can solve many of your problems. For example, if your friends share your beliefs, you will reduce the amount of peer pressure you may experience. Looking at it from the other side, good friends will accept you as you are with all your pros and cons.
Secondly, talk it through with someone you trust, such as a friend teacher or parent. Then they might be able to give you helpful advice. Maybe they had experience peer pressure in past too. Advice from someone who have tip with the problem may be the key to the success.
Another helpful suggestion is to trust your own feelings and know your personal limits. Consequently you will feel more confident in your actions. You will also don’t allow to manipulate yourself.
Lastly, it’s good idea to stay away from persons which cause peer pressure. As a result you will feel lees peer pressure. Maybe it even disappear!
To sum up, peer pressure is very big problem. However, if you follow my advices, peer pressure might never be a problem for you again.
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