October 2018 2 21 Report

Msiałem streścić tekst o globalnym ociepleniu ( myślę że nie potrzeba do tego teksu ale jaby co to: podręcznik Matura Prime Time str.50) i prosiłbym was o poprawienie ewentualnych błędów:

The earth is heating up and scientists think that this is caused by people. Burning fossil fuels and greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide increase and surround earth like blanket. The temperatures rise very quickly and the average temperature will rise by 3 Celsius degrees in next 100 years. It doesn't sound scary but it may have terrifying causes. When temperature rise the polar ice caps and glaciers are melting. This causes the sea levels rises. To 2100 year it will be 1 meter higher. This means that a lot of islands an coastal cities will be under water. If all of the Greenland and Antarctica ice sheets melt, the water level will rise about 60 meters and it means that most of the cities on earth will be under water. Global warming is a serious threat for some species. Scientist provide that even 30 to 40 % of the world's spices could became extinct because of climate change. Also because of the global warming the weather is more unpredictable. There are more natural disasters like heat waves,droughts,hurricanes and tornadoes.


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Na zadanie domowe miałem napisać esej, Prosiłbym o poprawienie błędów w mojej pracy. [treść ćwiczenia i esej poniżej] Z góry dzięki za każdy znaleziony błąd ;)"The editor of your sixth form college magazine has invited you to write an article suggesting ways for students to resist peer pressure. Write your article for the magazine (200-250 words)".Peer pressurePeer pressure is big problem among teenagers. A lot of young people can’t handle it and it causes stress, feeling of being inferior and others. What can you do, then, to resist peer pressure ? To start with, you should choose your friend carefully. By doing this you can solve many of your problems. For example, if your friends share your beliefs, you will reduce the amount of peer pressure you may experience. Looking at it from the other side, good friends will accept you as you are with all your pros and cons.Secondly, talk it through with someone you trust, such as a friend teacher or parent. Then they might be able to give you helpful advice. Maybe they had experience peer pressure in past too. Advice from someone who have tip with the problem may be the key to the success.Another helpful suggestion is to trust your own feelings and know your personal limits. Consequently you will feel more confident in your actions. You will also don’t allow to manipulate yourself.Lastly, it’s good idea to stay away from persons which cause peer pressure. As a result you will feel lees peer pressure. Maybe it even disappear!To sum up, peer pressure is very big problem. However, if you follow my advices, peer pressure might never be a problem for you again.
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