Question

muszę napisać na angielski o mojej najlepszej wycieczce, napisałam to, ale proszę, żeby ktoś sprawdził to, czy zgadzają się czasy i słowa, poprawił błędy itd.

My best trip was two years ago. That was canoeing trip with my friends. We were swimming river called Pilica. That was very funny, because it was raining, when we swam. We was all wet. Than it started sunshine and we was eating sweets and listening music, when we swam. At the evening while we to reach aim.It was campfire. We ate sausage and sang song. That was wonderful day.

Answer 1

Moim zdaniem jest to dobrze :) 

Answer 2

My best trip was two years ago. That was canoeing trip with my friends. We were swimming river called Pilica. That was very funny, because it was raining, when we swam. We were all wet. Sun was shining, and we ate candy and listening to music. At the evening was the campfire. We ate sausages and sang songs. That was wonderful day.

 

Miałeś tylko małe błędy, ale super Ci wyszło. :D