Question

Możecie sprawdzić opis całego dnia w czasie Past Simple? :)

I wake up at the 7 o'clock. I tooke a shower and ate a breakfast. I went to school at half past seven. I returned to home at twenty-five past seven. Later I ate a lunch with my familie. In the afternoon I did homeworks and learned. At six o ' clock I ate a dinner. In the evening I read a book, next I watched Tv with my mum. I cleaned my room, packed books to my backpack and pressed clothes to school. I went to bathroom, next I went to bed. It's ten o ' clock.

Z góry dziękuję za szybkie poprawki :)

Answer 1

I got up at 7 o'clock. I had a shower and ate breakfast.I went to school at half past seven. I went back to home at twenty-five past seven.(tutaj chyba musisz zmienić godzine bo to nie brzmi logicznie:'poszłam do szkoły o 7. wróciłam ze szkoły o 7:25')Later i ate lunch with my family. reszta jest już dobrze.

Answer 2

I WOKE up at 7 o'clock. I TOOK a shower and HAD breakfast. I went to school at half past seven. I returned home at 5 p.m. Later, I HAD lunch with my FAMILY. In the afternoon I did MY HOMEWORK and STUDIED FOR TOMORROW. At six o'clock I HAD dinner. In the evening I read a book and watched TV with my mum. NEXT I cleaned my room, packed books to my backpack and IRONED clothes to school. THEN, I went to bathroom AND AFTER THAT to bed. It WAS ten o'clock