Może mi ktoś to sprawdzic? Jest to opis osoby, którą podziwiam. Proszę bardzo potrzebuje an nie jestem pewna czy wszystko jest poprawnie gramatycznie(!!!).
The person I admire is a surgeon - Mirinda Baily with TV series “Chirurdzy”. She is American actress and her really name is Chandra Wilson, but I admire character who she plays in “Chirurdzy”, do not her.
She is medium- aged and she look like good. She is small and plump She has got dark, short, straight and brown hair. She has got small blue eyes and big nose. Baily has got big mouth too. She is dark- skinned and she has got white teeth and beauty smail.
She is very self- confident, polite and bossy. She is hard- working , she works in hospital in Seattle Grace Mercy West. She always fulfill obligationsis and is responsible. She is very affectionate and curious. She must all know and she like gossip. I admire her, because she is direct, outgoing and convincing, I like her conflict ways of solving problems . She is amazing, she can troubleshoot in easy way. She does not like argue. She is stubborn, but it is her positive trait. She is not conceited, maybe sometimes but really very seldom. She is usually very funny, but she tries be serious and it is funny because she can’ t be serious.
I200 think that Miranda Baily is positive person. It is very hard to describe, you have to see her in action! I love watches TV series in which she plays. She is just amazing and unpredictable ! ;]
The person I admire is a surgeon - Mirinda Baily with TV series “Chirurdzy”. She is American actress and her real name is Chandra Wilson, but I admire character which she plays in “Chirurdzy”, do not her.
She is medium-aged and she's good looking. She is short and plump. She has got dark, short, straight and brown hair. She has got small blue eyes and big nose. Baily has got big mouth (jeżeli chodzi o wygląd warg to by tu bardziej pasowało lips) too. She is dark-skinned and she has got white teeth and beauty smile.
She is very self-confident, polite and bossy. She is hard-working, she works in hospital in Seattle Grace Mercy West. She always fulfill obligationsis and is responsible. She is very affectionate and curious. She knows everything and she like gossip. I admire her, because she is direct, outgoing and convincing. I like her conflict ways of solving problems . She is amazing, she can troubleshoot in easy way. She does not like argue. She is stubborn, but it is her positive trait. She is not conceited, maybe sometimes but really very seldom. She is usually very funny, but she tries to be serious and it is funny because she can’t be serious.
I200 think that Miranda Baily is positive person. It is very hard to describe, you have to see her in action! I love watches TV series which she plays in. She is just amazing and unpredictable ! ;]
Moim zdaniem tak jest dobrze :)
The person I admire is a surgeon - Mirinda Baily from TV series “Chirurdzy”. She is an American actress and her real name is Chandra Wilson, but I love she in her part in “Chirurdzy”, not she in her real life.
She is medium- aged and she's looking really good. She is short and plump. She has got short, straight and brown hair. She's also got small blue eyes and big nose. Baily's lips aren't really big. She has got dark complexion. Her teeth are really white, so her smile is beautiful.
She is very self-confident, polite and bossy. She is hard-working , she works in hospital in Seattle Grace Mercy West. She always fulfill obligationsis and is responsible. She is very affectionate and curious. She always must know everything (She's such a gossip girl). I admire her, because she is direct, outgoing and convincing, I like her conflict ways of solving problems . She is amazing, she can troubleshoot in easy way. She does not like argue. She is stubborn, but it is her positive trait. She is not conceited, maybe sometimes but really very seldom. She is usually very funny, but when she is trying to be serious, it always doesn't works.
I think that Miranda Baily is positive person. It is very hard to describe her, you have to see her in action! I love watching TV serials in which she's playing. She is just amazing and unpredictable !
oraz w środkowej części opisu zamiast ciągle "She is" pisałabym Mirinda is albo Baily is. :)