Question

Może ktoś sprawdzić czy dobrze napisałem? Mam zadanie z angielskiego żeby opisać swój dzień. To moja praca:

I get up at 6 a.m. Later I brush my teeth, then get dressed. After that I have breakfast and getting ready for school. I go to bus at twenty to seven and drive to school by bus. I start lesson at 8 a.m. From 8 a.m. to 2 p.m. I'm sitting in school. Then drive to home by bus, after that I have lunch. At half past fifteen I surf the internet. Later go to run and play football. At 6 p.m. I do homework. Later I have dinner. Then I watch TV. At 9 p.m. I play computer games. Then I have shower and brush my teeth. I go to bed at half past twenty two.

Może ktoś sprawdzić czy to jest dobrze napisane gramatycznie i wgl. Z góry dzięki.

Answer 1

I get up at 6 a.m. Later I brush my teeth, then get dressed. After that I have breakfast and getting ready for school. I go to the bus at twenty to seven and drive to school by bus. I start school at 8 a.m. and I stay at school until 2 p.m.Then drive to home by bus, then I have lunch. At half past fifteen I surf on the internet. Later I go to run and play football. At 6 p.m. I do my homework. Later I have dinner. Then I watch TV. At 9 p.m. I play computer games. Then I take shower and brush my teeth.  I go to bed at half past 10 p.m.


( Niewiele błędów, co wyłowiłam to poprawiłam :) )

Answer 2

And I get ready
I'm at school zamiast I'm sitting at school.
Then I drive
the Internet
Later I go to run
I have a shower
and I brush