Question

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to apply for the job of au pair in your company. I found an advertisement in the paper and I read that you have few free places.
Two years ago I worked as a private babysitter and I was make out well, children liked me very much. Last summer I worked as a cleaner, so I can clean rooms, look after children, do washing up, ironing, all houseworks. I'm very friendly, responsible and I think I have good contact with children in every age. I also speak English very well, I was getting a lots jobs abroad where I must have been speaking with people.
I look forward to hearing from you,

xyz.

Answer 1

in the paper and .. - in the newspaper 

have few free places...- have few vacancy 

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