Question

Proszę o sprawdzenie listu poniżej przez osoby, które znają się na języku.

polecenie brzmi;

Twój kolega/twoja koleżanka z USA prowadzi niezdrowy tryb życia i planuje to zmienić. W odpowiedzi na jego/jej prośbę napisz list w którym;

>opiszesz, jak dbasz o swoją kondycję fizyczną.

>podasz dwa przykłady, jak się zdrowo odżywiasz .

>poradzisz mu/jej, co ma robić, żeby prowadzić zdrowy tryb życia

Hi Brian,

Thanks for your last letter. How are you?

I know that you want to change your lifestyle. I write you my advices. Everyday I work out in the gym. I go on a diet. I cut down on sweets. I eat more fruits and vegetables. You should eat healthy food e.g. fishes, fruits, vegetables and drink much water. You should also take exercise. You must get enough sleep and avoid stressful situations.

Anyway, I have to finish now. Wish you were here! Give my love to your family and say hi to your friends from me. See you soon.

XYZ

Answer 1

Hi Brian,

Thanks for your last letter. How are you? - to zdanie wywalamy, skupiamy się na poleceniu.

I know that you want to change your lifestyle. I write you my advices. - to wywalamy, bo jeszcze nie dajemy mu rad. Everyday I work out in the gym. I go on a diet. I cut down on sweets. - nie robimy z tego osobnych zdań, piszemy po przecinkach. I eat more fruits and vegetables. You should eat healthy food e.g. fishes, fruits, vegetables and drink much water. You should also take exercise. You must get enough sleep and avoid stressful situations. 

Anyway, I have to finish now.  Wish you were here! Give my love to your family and say hi to your friends from me. See you soon.

XYZ

 

 

Tak wygląda poprawiony list:

 

Hi Brian,

I know that you want to change your lifestyle. I wanna say you how I take care about my condition. Everyday I work out in the gym, I go on a diet, I cut down on sweets. I can eat health food, for example: eat more fruits and vegetables. You should eat healthy food e.g. fishes, fruits, vegetables and drink much water. You should also take exercise. You must get enough sleep and avoid stressful situations. 

Anyway, I have to finish now.  Wish you were here! Give my love to your family and say hi to your friends from me. See you soon.

XYZ

Answer 2

Grmataczynie powinno być pierwsze How are you? i poźniej I hope you are fine. i Thanks for your last letter.

i potem I want write you my advice. Evryday I workING. I am on a diet. 

Ale reszta wygląda w porządku. 

No może bym się jeszcze zastanowiła nad tym get enough sleep bo to brzmi coś w stylu musisz mieć dosyć spania. Ja bym z tym nie ryzykowała i napisała You must sleep at least 8 hour on day.