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Dear Sir
I am writing to apply for the position of Mat Servis which was advertised In „Dziennik Polski”.
I graduated from the Automotive technical school in Olsztyn. I have been working as a car mechanic Since 2013 for MatServis which is based In Jedwabno. I’m have completed the following courses of welder adn mechanic watch.I speak fluent german. and some english.

I am a creative, well-organized,very communicative and coperative person. I have good experience In working In a team and I believe that my person qualities make me a good team-leader. please find enclosed my cv and references from my former and present employers . i would be pleased to supply you with any further details concering my experience and qualifications.

I hope you will consider my application. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully abc


Proszę o sprawdzenie tego listu.
Odpowiedzi w stylu , tak,jest dobrze zgłaszam !

Answer 1

Dear...

I am writing to apply for the position of MatServis which was advertised in the newspaper - „Dziennik Polski”. I graduated from the Automotive technical school in Olsztyn. I have been working as a car mechanic since 2013 for MatServis in Jedwabno. I’m have completed the course for welder and mechanical watch. I speak fluent german and some english. 

I am a creative, well-organized, very communicative and cooperative person. I have a lot of experience in working in a team and I believe that my personal qualities make me a good team leader.

I send my CV and letters of recomendation from former and present employers as attachment. I would be happy to supply you with any further details concering my experience and qualifications.

I hope you will consider my application. I look forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully abc

Tak ogólnie to spoko, jest OK, ale język jest mieszany. Widać, że niektóre zdania są ściągniete z neta, bo są za formalne, ale mam nadzieję, że dostaniesz pracę :)